{"time":1613954227713,"blocks":[{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"最近一直在读麦基的《故事》，发现自己对书中的“节拍”概念理解模糊不清。需要单独挑出来学习一下：","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"quote","data":{"text":"在场景里面的便是最小的结构成分：<b>节拍</b>。<div><br></div><div><b>节拍</b>是动作/反应中一种行为的交替。这些变化的行为通过一个又一个节拍构筑了场景的转折。<br></div>"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>故事</b> = 第一幕 + 第二幕 + 第三幕","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>幕</b> = 序列1 + 序列2 + 序列3 + ......","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>序列 </b>= 场景(事件)1 + 场景2 +场景3 + ......","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景</b> = 节拍1 + 节拍2 + 节拍3 + ......","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>节拍</b> = 动作/反应","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"翻了部评分比较高的动漫《伍六七之玄武国篇》第一集学习一下：（总时长15分钟）","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"image","data":{"url":"https://i-xue-cn.pek3b.qingstor.com/238e25.png"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>开头场景：</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"三个刺客在场馆聊天开玩笑，说起七大暗影刺客之一的赤牙被人杀死了","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"有个说是很强的吸血鬼刺客","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"是不给钱被发型师打死啦","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"哈哈哈大笑后，三个人却被坐在邻桌的人灭口","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"---影片片头音乐---","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景1</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"理发店内，顾客要求为难的发型","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景2</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"理发店门口","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"音乐特别欢快，一个小姑娘出场，可乐找他去玩滑板，然后爽快的答应","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景3</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"海边空地","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"喝可乐，聊了近期发生了爆炸","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"滑板小天才，实际很烂","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"新的遗愿清单，请幽灵保护她","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景4</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"黑紫色的背景下，一堆蒙面人","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"暗影刺客告状，大佬发话派更多的刺客追杀","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景5</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"新刺客来小岛刺杀任务，但很快被赶走，但还是造成了无辜地伤害","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景6</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"路边小吃摊","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"两个路人在讨论刺客的事，看到发型师直接被吓跑","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"店老板是头老牛问道，吃肉丸子，有没想过以后不做刺客，卖卖牛杂","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景7</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"路边小吃摊 ","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"一个小孩儿付小费要求七表演两次以气驭剪","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景8</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"一个古怪的人对一个女孩说，你还可以见他最后一面，以后你们就是敌人了","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景9</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"医院","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"交费后，看到一张39000多的欠条","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景10</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"理发店门口的大楼上","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"一个吐毒水的刺客前来追杀","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"一开始特别厉害，不过还是被他踩在了脚下","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景11</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"那个古怪的人再次出现","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"他对着七说了一堆话","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"你是受到诅咒的暗影刺客，你去到哪里，哪里就有杀戮","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"是这个古怪的男人杀了赤牙，而不是他","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"只有一个办法，去玄武国，是他的宿命，只要去了帮他记起以前的事","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"然后古怪人走的时候对身边的小姑娘说走，违抗师令是要惩罚的","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景12</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"出现一块令牌","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"理发店内，七睡不着，拿出一套衣服看了半天","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"然后一个黑影闪了半天","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"接着郑重其事的换上衣服","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景13</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"天亮出门，一个刺客再次找上门来","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"七走了过去，淡定地说，他要回玄武国去了","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>场景14</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"暗影刺客基地收到信息后，立即下令，撤离所有在岛上的刺客任务，所以人追杀这个人","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"是，首领","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"然后站在背后是那个古怪人的身影","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"---结束---","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"这15分钟的片子反复看了三遍发现还是不太懂，搜了一下才发现这是第三部，一度怀疑自己理解力更不上年轻人了。不过看不懂也不能影响学习故事的动力，节拍太细没有那么多的时间去写，简单写了下粗略地场景，算上开头场景一共是15个。","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"就先拿<b>开头场景</b>学习一下《故事》中的分析：","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"quote","data":{"text":"要分析一个场景，你必须解剖出文本和潜文本层面上的所有行为模式。一旦通过适当的方式来研究一个场景，其瑕疵便会一目了然。以下是一个五步程序，旨在令一个场景吐露出它的秘密。"}},{"type":"quote","data":{"text":"第一步：确定冲突<div>第二步：标注开篇价值<br></div><div>第三步：将场景分解为节拍<br></div><div>第四步：标注结尾价值并比较开篇价值<br></div><div>第五步：审察节拍并定位转折点<br></div>"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"<b>开头场景</b>","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"list","data":{"style":"ordered","items":["三个人在茶馆轻松愉快的开着别人的玩笑，突然被人灭口，这三个人看起来同是刺客，说起业内一个大佬被个菜鸟干掉，大开玩笑不以为然，谁知自己的死期已到，被人暗算。冲突是什么？那个发型师真的那么厉害？为什么要杀他？另外，邻桌的这个人我猜是死者的什么人，所以出手杀了这几个乱开玩笑的人。这里表达的冲突是要为死者报仇吗？","场景的负荷是负面的，死了三个人后，外加最后那个邻桌女人的表情","一开篇就上来个大勾子，发型师是谁？他有什么厉害？那个大佬是七大刺客之一，这么厉害怎么被杀的？到底是不是发型师干的？一上来就死三个人，这是刺客的常态吗？这是怎样的一个故事？","三个人围坐在桌边，一个人起身倒茶，然后说出了大佬被杀的事，坐一旁的另一人附和到他也听说了，还透露出大佬的厉害，接着这个倒茶的人开起了玩笑，紧接着这个人面色难看，镜头转到他的侧面，他口里喷出鲜血，倒在了桌子上。看到这个另外两人起身，拔出自己的武器正要看是谁，这两个人也倒地了，给镜头这三人后颈脖子处同中了一种花针一样的暗器，接着邻桌一女的邪恶的脸。","看到这里是不是这个女人用的暗器呢？没有看到，她最后眉头一皱，一脸的邪恶，她是来给大佬报仇的吗？都暂时只是我的猜测。非常精彩的开场，特别想看下去，后面到底会发生什么。文本动作：三人聊天开玩笑，被旁边的人杀了；潜文本是说这个发型师很厉害，居然能杀掉一等一的高手，而因为这次杀害发型师要付出代价，复仇的人已经来了。"]}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"这一集看完后，我的个人感觉是整部片子在风趣幽默地讲述一个沉重地刺客追杀故事，特别的是主角配音是个广东腔的搞笑普通话。","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"第一集的故事内容交代了主角刺客的身份，而且他普通人的身份是个发型师，他杀了一个刺客集团的大佬，所以被一堆刺客追杀，而且连累到了小岛上的居民，所以他必须离开。虽然后面有澄清人并不是他杀的，是刺客集团内部人栽赃给他的，而这个人跟他说，他必须去玄武国，因为他是被诅咒的人，他在哪里哪里就有杀戮。","alignment":"left"}},{"type":"paragraph","data":{"text":"这个暗杀的事件现在看起来是主角的激励事件，他不得不做出改变，他必须得离开小岛，去那个所说的玄武国寻找答案，直面自己的使命迎接挑战。刚好到这第一集完成了，镜头最后给了个主角走在路上的背影，都在为观众继续打开第二集做好铺垫。看完第一集就想写写的动力也在此吧，的确是个讲故事的高手，对得起豆瓣评分值得学习。","alignment":"left"}}],"version":"2.19.1"}